Wednesday 27 August 2014

Marshmallows - Bare Bones

WALT: Create a bare bones plan


  1. Boy at campfire cooking marshmallows.
  2. Something creeps up behind him.
  3. Fire gets bigger and brighter.
  4. Boy chucks blanket over the creature.
  5. Creature gets tangled up in blanket.
  6. Creature rips blanket.
  7. Boy throws sticks at creature
  8. Boy feels sorry for creature.
  9. Creature is a dragon.
  10. Boy pats dragon.
  11. Dragon gives boy ride.
  12. Best Friends Forever

1 comment:

  1. Hi Finlay,
    I see were you are going with this story and in my point of view it seems like a misunderstanding, the dragon was nice but the boy was frightened. Was he not? this story to me is tragic even though it is short it is tragic because well again, a misunderstanding I think if this was a full story then you could get loads of comments and views! I also just wanna say keep up the good work!

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