Monday 30 June 2014

WALT: Compensation to tidy numbers

Hanging bed Description


WALT: Show not tell

I slowly walked through the trees as the sun shone through them, I looked around and saw something up in the treetops, I jumped and saw that it was bigger than the biggest bird on earth. The flashes of colors on the soft fabric was like a rainbow jumping, the pillows were like silk and were as colorful as a rainbow. There was a lamp next to it and was a bright as the brightest star. There was a ladder next to the bed that was as tall as one thousand chipmunks stacked on top of each other. I climbed up the ladder and jumped on my new hanging bed.



Friday 20 June 2014

#1 Auckland

We Are in Auckland at the moment and are in a pub with a friend of my cousin Craig's called Sarah. We are looking forward to the warriors and are having loads of fun! We went up the Sky Tower and went in a glass elevator that has a glass panel in the bottom of it and was SUPER scary even though we had an awesome view at the top. Today we also went bowling and I won the first game (85 points was the winner) and Craig (aka Italy) won the second round. Then we dropped Sarah off at her house and went home (Craig's Home, obviously, Why would we want to go home!)

Monday 16 June 2014

Argument writing - Electric cars

Dear People that hate Electric Cars


I Strongly believe that electric cars should be made because it saves Money and then we don’t have to have petrol in the world. Petrol is bad for the environment and is only good for cars with motors.


If people in the world don’t want electric cars then what was the point in spending those millions of dollars to make them.

It saves the environment and all the trees in the forest. We would have less pollution in the world and less trees would die.

Yours sincerely


Finlay