WALT: Show not tell
I slowly walked through the trees as the sun shone through them, I looked around and saw something up in the treetops, I jumped and saw that it was bigger than the biggest bird on earth. The flashes of colors on the soft fabric was like a rainbow jumping, the pillows were like silk and were as colorful as a rainbow. There was a lamp next to it and was a bright as the brightest star. There was a ladder next to the bed that was as tall as one thousand chipmunks stacked on top of each other. I climbed up the ladder and jumped on my new hanging bed.
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